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Writing

 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 9

My goal is to use colons: and dashes- and speech marks""):

Self

Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10299915"

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8772736"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9969659" How to make a easy (and delicious) Pizza. 1. Wash your germy hands with soap so the food doesn't get dirty.
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

2. Put on your coloured cooking apron. So your clothes don't get dirty.

3. Make your squished dough and knead it with your knuckles.

4.Roll your squishy dough into a circle.

5.Spread thick,gloopy,gooey tomato sauce on the top of your dough or replace it with spaghetti.

6. Put your toppings on like: pineapple,meat,veges anything can go on a pizza

7.Now grate your delicious pamasan cheese onto your yummy pizza.

8.Place your pizza in the boiling hot oven and please cook it.

9.After your timer go's off. Gently cut it into yummy sclices and enjoy.

How to make a vegetable garden.

1.To start with plant beautiful little seeds in the soft compost.

2.A few minutes later carefully water the seeds in cold icy water.

3.After watering the seeds go outside and start to dig a fresh brown garden.

4.Following on get the seedlings and gently plant them in the fresh brown garden

5.By that time the seeds are not seeds but little plants so patt into the freshly dug garden

6.At the end you will have a beautifuly green garden and are to keep watering it with cold icy water. WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9640950"
 * Speaking and Listening**

Don’t take your family to Mc’Donald’s it has too much fat, grease and oil in it. I think Mc’Donald’s is not that great. But I watched a show last year and quite a few things you eat, are not what you think you're eating. Some people eat Mc’Donald’s and get Diabetes.

Mc’Donald’s kills about 1 million cows a year. And that is just in the u.s.a. that means 500,000 pounds of beef is processed every day and then they are made into burgers so that is 2609 cows a day that is not good. The pigs in the breakfast menu are not grown by Mc'donalds. They live in a farming house. The farming home owner cleans only twice in about 5 months but it is still apaulling. The runts of the litter are taken and immediatly killed A mother will be taken into a truck thinking they are going somewhere very nice but end up in a burger. All this time her piglets are going through the same ordeal as their mum did. Chickens? you do not want me to tell you about chickens.

If that is not enough hear about this. Mc'donalds BRIBES CHILDREN! to eat there. The children will beg their parents until they give in just to get rid of their head-aches. Then their happy meals come and the children do not eat their happy meals they just play with their toys. Most of the toys are rubbish but kids don't care. Oh and Mc'donald adverts say "buy one get a toy free". But the toys are boring. On Mc'donalds playground the slides friction you, it can be to small and older kids some can not play on it because there could be a age limit. The playground has lots of different colours to make it more interesting. They make it look interesting but once you've been inside for 5 minutes it is boring.Trust me I am a kid.

A Mc'donalds happy meal has more than 500 calories in it. There are even more in an adults meal. You would have to walk seven hours straight just to burn a big mac's fat! Even pet food is healthier than Mc'donalds. It has less fat, sugar and oil. You would have serious fat problems. Mc'Donald's is addicting. Addicting means once you eat or drink it you've got to have more. My sister is addicted to Mc'Donalds and is always wanting to eat there.

So as I said do not, I repeat do not take your family to Mc'donalds.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;"> walt express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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