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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8

Self Term 3 week 10 my goal is to use some similes for my sentence beginnings. My goal is to commas after my speech

Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10300067"

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8831520"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ How to make a delicious healthy pizza 1. Wash your disgratsful hands in the freezing cold water 2. Put on your super messy apron 3. Make the sticky dough 4. Roll out the squishy dough into a flat shape 5. spread out the juicy tomato sauce on top 6. put your favourite toppings on 7. grate the sparkly smooth cheese and sprinkle on top 8. place in the over heated oven to cook but be careful that you don't burn your hands 9. When ready cut into how many slices you want and then eat your delicious pizza.
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

How To Make A Juicy Delicious Vegetable Garden You will need: Shovel Gardening gloves Seeds And a place to use. Gardening pots And gardening tools

‍‍1. First ‍ get your gardening pots and dig a little hole then get your tiny seeds and put the seeds in the hole then cover the hole up with the soil around the top of the pot. 2. Next water the soil on top of the seeds but don't put to much water on the soil otherwise the seeds will die. 3. Later you have to get your shovel and dig up a hole about the same size hole that you did in the gardening pots but you dig the hole where you want your garden. ‍ 4. After that get your plants then take your plants out of the pots and put them in the ground. 5. Later on pat down the soft warm soil with your cold soiled hands. 6. Finally water the plants in the ground just wait for your garden to grow then you will have a beautiful garden to eat.

Violently shaking On land extremely hot Land as tough as bricks Crater wall collapsed and broke the ruins in 1914 Ash spreads across white island No survivors except one cat named peter Ocean so hot and smells next to white island

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641016"

Did you know a little bit of chocolate each day is good for you but If you have too much chocolate you can become unhealthy. You can get different types of chocolate. The only chocolate that is good for you is dark chocolate. Before I give you my reasons on why chocolate is only good for you as a treat, I'll give you a little history lesson. Christopher Columbus brought the first coca beans back to Europe in 1502. That was an unbelievable 509 years ago

The fact is that too much chocolate will make you unhealthy. This will cause holes in your teeth and for you to get tooth decay because of the sugar in the chocolate, too much of it and your teeth will rot. Chocolate has 220 calories for 10 pieces and 13g of fat. You have to walk for one whole hour to burn off 10 small blocks of chocolate or run for 20 minutes non-stop. That's crazy!!!!

However there are different types of chocolate like dark chocolate, white chocolate, milk chocolate, bubbly, chocolate with nuts and lots of others. Eating too much of these can make you sick. Milk chocolate is a mixture of LOTS of sugar, cocoa mass, cocoa butter and milk. White chocolate is white because it has no cocoa mass, just pale cocoa butter and sugar. In some countries white chocolate is not sold as a chocolate because it does not have cocoa mass in it. Dark chocolate does not have added milk. It contains cocoa butter, cocoa mass, and usually SOME sugar. For me white chocolate has got to be the most disgusting chocolate I have ever tasted.

Dark chocolate is the best chocolate to eat because it has more fibre in it. Fibre is what keeps you full. So you don't need to eat as much as the sweet stuff. It also has antioxidants in it, which if you get high blood pressure will lower it, and it means you are less likely to get a heart attack with lower blood pressure. When it comes to chocolate, dark chocolate is at the top of pyramid for chocolate. So if you are going to eat any chocolate eat dark chocolate.

Just to remind you chocolate can make you unhealthy and sick so don't have too much if you buy some. Mrs Van der Merve, says that even though she LOVES chocolate she knows that too much chocolate is bad for you, so she only has it once a week. So next time you eat chocolate don't stuff it in your face.

WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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Topic
__Investigation__

__Question-__ What happens to foods when we put them into water ?

__What you will need:__ Water, sugar, flour, baking soda, cooking oil, lemon juice.

__What you will do:__ Put the sugar, flour, baking soda, cooking oil, lemon juice into an individual cup of water. Watch for one minute then stir and watch for another minute.

__What do you predict.__ What do you think will happen when you put them into water ? Sugar bubbly Flour _do nothing Baking soda gooey Cooking oil sticky __ Lemon juice change color ` __

What did you find out: the sugar baking soda and the lemon juice dissolved in the water and the cooking oil and the flour float

What conclusions can you make ? the sugar, baking soda and the lemon juice are white

What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment. I