Tamsin

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Literacy
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Very hot and steamy Only very little vegetation Lava glowing lava slowly lowers to the ground to burn what it can find Could get badly hurt without gear An eruption while your there could ruin everything living Noisy noisy noisy boom boom On the ground we walk crushing bracable


 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8 My Goal is to put a capital letter at the start of names. My Goal is to use preposition at the beginning of my sentences.

Term 3 Week 9 My Goal is to use commas in my sentences. My Goal is to use a feeling at the start of some of my sentences.

Term 3 Week 10 My Goal //is to start a new line every time a different person speaks.// //My Goal is to start some sentences with a 'ing' verb.//

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__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

"YAY" Izzy is back from Australia.Unexpectedly Izzy had no Idea that it was Zone and was all ready tired from traveling from Australia to New Zealand. Running like a cheetah Izzy zapped through people and tried to come first.Dogging cow poo was the hardest for Izzy and Simone.No surprise Simone came first as she always does. Like a sloth Izzy looked as if she was going to callapes on me when I was talking to her.Izzy was so tired it seemed like she had no idea who I was. Tired than ever Izzy slowly strolled through our long grass.Slow like a slug Izzy went home.

__Thursday 22 September__

"I am so lucky!!". 'YAY!!' Its Basketball zone and I am so lucky because I got into the zone even though our team lost I still got into the zone. Excitingly I woke up and got ready for basketball zone I still couldn't believe that I got in.Stumbling over a chair and weaving in and out of all my sisters and brother I got out the door,"Finally" I said to my self,"I've got through". Rushing to school I finally got to school and got changed into my clothes.Through the door I ran ready for the big game not knowing I was an hour early.FUN!. It happened where I was standing there ready than ever.Worried someone was going to knock my glasses off. My Dad was cheering us on as we walked on to the court, steering at the other team waiting to win the game and knock them to there feet.Unfortunately we came second out of the hole girls basketball team.

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WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8828460"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

media type="custom" key="9969613" How to make a ‍scrumptious, healthy ‍pizza 1. ‍Wash your hands with fresh heating water and pink squashy soap make shore that there squeaky clean 2. Put your seriously long Sapphire blue apron on. 3. Following on make the dough smoothly and thoroughly knead through it. 4. ‍slowly ‍roll out the smooth dough into a non-sticky shape with your brown roller. 5. Spread bright,shocking red tomato flavered sauce on top. 6. Grate the yellow stringy cheese with your shiny silver grater.Slowly and carefully sprinkle grated cheese on top. 7. Once your cheese is sprinkled around your pizza place your other delightful toppings on. 8. Just as your toppings are on place in the blazing oven Warning: Be careful not to burn your hands. 9. Eventually When ready slice the scrumptious pizza into sections and enjoy ‍

Title:How to make a multi-coloured garden. Goal:How to make a fruit and veggie garden. Steps:steps 1. To begin with drop ‍miniature dark ‍ coloured seeds into plastic containers. 2. Following on sprinkle sparkling <range type="comment" id="408278">‍fresh ‍ icy cold crystal blue water carefully over the seedlings. 3. Dig Dark deep hollow holes in damp soil but don't dig to deep. 4. Carefully place seedlings into the damp Duggen Holes. 5.As soon as that has been done pat fresh soil around the seedlings and dampen it. 6.Eventually you will end up with a bright colourful eatable garden.But remember from time to time your garden will need to be watered with fresh water.

WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641138"

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #020273; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 150%;">Basketball is a great sport for everyone!!!!!! <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">Basketball is a fantastic sport, It is appealing to all ages from toddler to older than 60 it really depends on if you can move and jump around. I think that basketball is an incredible sport for everyone to play because you are using all your body parts and you get really really fit.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">Firstly, it is a very exciting game to play and watch. Basketball was first invented in December 1891, by James Naismith and also did you know that the first Basketball was actually soccer ball. You learn lots of marvelous skills such as dribbling, dunking, Shooting, guarding, small Forward, Power Forward and Point guard but to be good it takes a lot of time to practice.The Chicago Bulls usually practice for about 2-3 hours on the court and then go to the gym for 4-5 hours each day.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">Secondly,it is a good exercise,physically you use all your body parts you use your calves and your quadriceps for running and, for shooting you use your legs, forearms and a little bit of your biceps.You get really fit from Basketball if you constantly practice for about a hour each day. When you have a game on you really need to eat food from about 2-3 hours before the game. Here are some food you should eat before or after the game Cereals and Grains, Vegetables, Crackers, Peanut butter sandwiches, Bagels and lots of fruit.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">As a result Basketball is one of the most popular games in the world because you get super fit and that Basketball has enjoyed a enormous rise in popularity over the last decade. It is very easy to track down a few key points that could be helping and lending a hand to the growth of basketball. Some people even go so far as to say that basketball is no more popular than it was back in the prime days of Michael Jordan. If this were the case, than the games wouldn’t be popular, and they wouldn’t constantly have packed arenas and high ratings.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">Basketball is a great because of the above reasons. Just like education,Basketball is the Greatest Equalizers of our time not to mention that it creates friendship over the world.

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #040481; font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 170%;">That is why I think that Basketball is a stupendous game to play.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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Numeracy
WALT solve addition problems by jumping along a number line. __ Success criteria __

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Topic
__Investigation.__ __Question__- What will happen to the sugar when we put it in the water __What you will need.__ __What you will do:__ Put the different sugars in the water to see what happens. __What do you predict?__ What do you think will happen to the different sugars? I think it will dissolve, fizz up,stay at the top,stay at the bottom in a big hunk,melt or change into water or a tea colour. __What did you find out:__
 * Brown Sugar, Coffee Crystals, Icing Sugar, White Sugar, Sugar Cubes.**
 * Water, Stopwatch**


 * || It melted || It disappeared || It changed into water or tea || It sat on the bottom || None ||
 * White Sugar ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||
 * Brown Sugar ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||
 * Coffee Crystals ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||
 * Icing Sugar ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||
 * Sugar Cubes ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||

__What conclusions can you make ?__

__What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment.__