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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8 My goal is to start some sentences with a noun verb combination and a feeling. I must use full stops and capital letters at the beginnings of sentences.

Self

Peer Term 3 Week 9 My goal is to start a sentence with a simlie and use some commas. Term 3 Week 10 My goal is to start with a feeling and start to use commas.

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling. My amazing soccer game "GOAL!!!" screamed Lovtie. "AHHHH" cheered the crowd. "The crowd goes wild" I said in amazement, it's the last soccer game of the year. YAY. I'm so exited because I can finally rest on a Saturday. Can you believe it? I'm so exited I might burst into little tiny pieces. Excitedly I sat down on a stripy and grassy green chair with some twisty's and a nice fizzy drink. BUT... to my horror it wasn't the last game. OH NO !!!!!!! I have been looking forward to the last game.Now my plans have been __ruained__

Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10282377" width="170" height="170"

WALT write a vivid description of a character.

**DJ Quack** ** __Waka waka waka__ that's the sound of DJ Quacks small black Dance-Mixer he LOVES to play DJ. "Quack quack quack wheres my** **disco balls?" he will quack. He's golden yellow he's __extremley__ funny.**  **"wheres my red-sun-glasses?". he loves his sun-glasses**. Don't say I din't warn you he's so so cute like a kitten. He's also very very chubby.

**Do you want to know what he does? Well he will love to dance with you. He likes to dance. He sits** **and relaxes by watching T.V and he put's the volume up to** **MAX!!! because he HATES being**  **quite.**  he loves to sing. He also plays DJ.


 * Do you know his weakness? "NO change the song I hate western songs" He will Quack. **
 *  He .HATES being quite.Behind the corner he found people taking his DJ stuff away. **
 * "leave my DJ stuff alone" **

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

media type="custom" key="8696336" WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9984903" ‍1.How to make your dream pizza ‍ 2.Wash you ‍descusting ‍ hands. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">3.Put on your red plastic apron. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">4. Make the squashy dough. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">5.Roll out the dough into your dream shape. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;"><range type="comment" id="91031">‍6.Spread on the delicious tomato sauce. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">7.Grate the <range type="comment" id="756668">‍yellow mild ‍ cheese on the pizza. ‍ <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">8.Put on your favorite dreamy toppings. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">9.Then place the dream pizza in you red oven to cook. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1de2c5; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">10.When your dream pizza is ready get your cutter to cut it. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;"> 11.Then sit down and eat your delicious dreamy pizza.
 * <range type="comment" id="156086">Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

Speaking and Listening
<span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//How to plant a magnificent garden//

<span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//what you will need:// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//spade// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//tubs// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//water can// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//fingers// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//seeds// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//soil// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//1.Get a packet of dark seeds and put them in the smelly dark brown soil// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//2.Next get any kind of water cans and pour a little bit of water on every seed// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//3.Dig little holes in the smelly dark brown soil// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//4.Then get the seedlings and put them in the in the hole you dug// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//5.Get your figers and cover up the hole you dug// <span style="color: #2be5ce; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">//6.Before you can say supercallafrigalisticexpelladoshos your garden is finshed//

WALT write and present a persuasive argument <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641068"

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 130%;">What is the better pet Kittens or Puppies? Well I think Kitten’s, you will find out soon about Kittens.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 130%;">Did you know that if you let a black cat cross your path its good luck BUT... if you make it cross the road BAD LUCK FOR YOU.! I don't know how they bring good luck but I'll find out soon

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 130%;">Do you know how much Kittens and Puppies are? Well it depends on the breed anyway, it’s so unfair but they are not cheap to get. I thought that they were $10 but someone told me that they are $150, so what gives?. They can see 120 feet but my friend said that they can only see a tiny way like 4 feet but I think it's between. But that's what he thinks! Did you know Kittens are easy to look after? Well they are! I know they are hard to control when you want them and their dinner is ready but just clap or say their name. Guess what. Like I said Kittens are better then Puppies because You only spend $30 on a cat a month WOW THAT'S AMAZING. Did you know that?

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 130%;">Kittens are playful things. If you want a Kitten to play with you give them a plastic bag and TA-DA they play with it. My friend says that it might get stuck in the throat but my Kittens play with them. One time my Kitten Churchill he did a belly flop over the plastic bag it was funny. Like I said Puppy lovers out there love Kittens because they are so cute and feel like pillows. They also like smooth head butts, but if their ears go back and they run and pounce on you, they are in a playful mood.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 130%;">That's why I believe kittens are better than puppies because they are cheap to look after, and playful and cuddly.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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Topic
**Salt, quarter teaspoon measure, hot water and cold water, clear cup, thermometer, and a partner.** || 1. Mix hot and cold water in the cup so that when you test it with the thermometer, it reads 20°C. 2. Stir in salt, a quarter teaspoon at a time. Stir until each teaspoon of salt has dissolved before adding the next teaspoon. Record how many teaspoons of salt you stirred in before it stops dissolving. 3. Repeat this for water at 30°C, 40°C, and 50°C || How many teaspoons of salt do you think will dissolve in the water? 15 Why do you think there are different temperatures of water? for sincse. if I'm wrong I don't know. Will the temperature of water affect the amount of salt that goes into it ? How? yes the hotter the water the more salt as well as the colder it is the less salt. Which temperature of water will dissolve the most salt ? || Temperature of Water How many teaspoons could be stirred in? ||  || i wonder what will happin if you put suger in freezing water_ ||
 * Investigation Team 3 Keely Question- How much salt will dissolve in the water? ||
 * __What you will need:__
 * __What you will do:__
 * __What do you predict?__
 * What did you find out:
 * 20°C 17 |||| | |||| | |||| | ||  |||| | |||| | |||| | ||   |||| | |||| | |||| | ||   ||
 * 30*C17 15 |||| | |||| | || | ||
 * 50*C 16 |||| | |||| | |||| | | ||  || | |||| | |||| | | || [[image:http://c1.wikicdn.com/i/editor/insert_table.gif]] ||
 * __What conclusions can you make ? it disolved quickly it only took 16 quater tea spoons for 50*C for 20*C it was 17 and for 30*C it was 15__ ||
 * __ What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment. ___
 * 50*C 16 |||| | |||| | |||| | | ||  || | |||| | |||| | | || [[image:http://c1.wikicdn.com/i/editor/insert_table.gif]] ||
 * __What conclusions can you make ? it disolved quickly it only took 16 quater tea spoons for 50*C for 20*C it was 17 and for 30*C it was 15__ ||
 * __ What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment. ___