Samantha

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My Writing Goals


Term 3 Week 8 My goal is to start some sentences with prepositions. My goal is to start with captal letters and full stops regulary.

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__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

18/08/11 __Slosh, slosh, slosh __trugging (trudging) across the muddy field trying not to get my foot stuck in the slimy mud. __Rushing__ over to the field to train with my soccer mates.

__SCORE!!!__ My parents are jumping up and down just like a gorilla just got some creamy delicious bananas. __Bradly__ went up to have a go and SCORE!!!! He got a goal, everyone was calling his name like he was king of the jungle.

__Next__ lesson was to kick to a partner, mine was Chelsea. __Drip, drip, drip__ as sweat trickles down my face it feels like I just had a spa at my granddads' house.

__Suddenly__ I saw my couch(coach) put out the cones, we must be having a game ahhhhhhhh. Beeeeeeeeeeep!!! As the whistle blew the game started. When the practise game was finshed (finished) it was 4 to our team and 2 to the other team, so we, we, we, we ,we WON!!!

Ambing (Ambling) home I told my mum everything that happened she was so proud me and so was Matthew, Dad and I.

Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map.

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__ Princess Jewel __

Swish, swish, swish as the sea __calmly__ moves from side to side, have you ever seen the waves when the sun comes up ? Well if your lucky enough to see what is only written in books, a little mermaid sitting on a rock. Open your eyes wide and have a big look at her amazing tail, you'll never believe your eyes, because its just like gold or jewels you'll just want to grab it and run away now that's what every child will want. Pretty flowers everywhere but Princess Jewels flower is no ordinary flower it is a pink spiky flower that only the princess has. It protects the sea and her people from the sea, now that is magical. Shine!!! as the sun comes up once everyone is asleep Princess Jewel sneaks her sparkly tail out of her big nut bed and swims up to the rock. She checks if anyone is here but nobody was there. Then the sun came up and the most magical thing happened her eyes brightened and glowed I bet nobodies eyes could do that.

Deep down in the cave nobody has been in there but there was a mermaid like the only mermaid she was Princess Jewel. One day one of the animals were hurt. Princess Jewel she was tearified so Princess Jewel came up and healed the hurt creature. Princess Jewel was so loyal she said they can stop what they are doing and have free choice for a week.

In the past Princess Jewel had been doing something she was not aloud to do but now the queen looked up to her and wow she is a good princess and she is ready to take my place as queen. Now I've looked up to her and she is ready because she is loyal, brave and she is a great healer just like me.

Order Order order I'd like to speak to my daughter Shouted the queen "I think you've learned your lesson and now you can do anything you want like do your famous flips and swim a mile.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

How to make a magnificent pizza 1.First put on your colourful apron and tie it until it is tight. 2. Next wash your dirty hands with nice fresh soapy water. 3. After that make the squishy dough with flour, knead it firmly. 4. Following on roll out the squishy dough into a round shape. 5. Eventually spread juicy tomato sauce on top until it's fill with the sauce. 6. Put your delicious toppings whatever you want on your pizza. 7. Later on grate the yummy big cheese and sprinkle little bits on top. 8. Carefully place the magnificent pizza in the burning hot oven. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">9. Finally when you are ready to cut into triangles you can have a look what you have done you may eat your delicious peace of pizza.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">How to make a delicious fruit also a veggie garden. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">Goal: How to make plants grow and grow. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">Materials: fruit and veggie seeds, water, spade carton.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;"><range type="comment" id="126360">1. First rip open a packet of tiny or big seeds and spread them around the dirty soil. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">2. Carefully water the seeds with icy cold water so they get fresh and healthy. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">3. Now you can use your spade and dig until there is a gigantic hole in the middle of your dirt. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">4. Later on put the fresh and healthy plants into the big gigantic hole. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">5. Following on when you have put your plants in pat it around carefully so it won't fall over. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">6. Finally you have a wonderful garden so everybody can have fresh fruit and veggies forever.

Speaking and Listening WALT write and present a persuasive argument. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641108"

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">YAY!!! I scored a goal on a Saturday morning everybody was pleased with me I was glad even my mum was happy too. That's the way to start a Saturday morning I whispered to myself.

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">I believe that girls should do soccer because it is fun, they learn different kinds of ball skills like stop, long kicks and turn kick. You learn lots of ways to stop a ball like foot on top of the ball, foot out, headbutt down and tummy slide. When you get a goal feel proud of yourself because everybody else will be proud of you like your team mates, coach and parents as much you a proud of you.

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">Do you think that Soccer doesn't get you fit? Well think again! Because you do get fit by jogging, sprinting, increasing your muscle strength and improving your ball skills. It is important to eat cereals, bread, pasta, rice, fruit and vegetables so you get energy to run around. Make sure that you drink plenty of water. Drink before, during and after physical exercise. Drink more than just to quench your thirst. So not only is soccer fun but it gets you nice and fit too.

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">Do you really think you have to run faster and be the best there. Well you don't have to be the best you just have to get in there and do what you were trained for because everybody will be cheering you on and they don't just want you to do nothing. At soccer you don't have to be perfect you can be all different shapes and sizes. You can be skinny, fat, tall and short. Everybody can do soccer even your mum and dad can do soccer Wow!! they will get millions and millions of goals can you imagine your dad doing soccer. Just because you are small in soccer doesn't mean they can get it off you.

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">That is why girls + me should do soccer. It's a great game.

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8813338"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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