Aidan

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Writing

 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8 My goal is to start some of my sentences with a feeling and to use speech marks! My goal is to use capital letters when I use speech marks

Self

Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling. THE GREAT ESCAPE Oh no where has that crazy dog gone now.We just got home after we had watched the rugby and discoverd that our dog blue had` disaperd.Searching down every road we could not find him.I atlest went down 15 Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10300089"

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

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WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9969667"
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

How to make a healthy pizza 1. wash your gooey old hands in soapy water. 2.Put on your red spotty apron. 3.make puffy squishy dough by needing it. 4.roll out the dough with a wooden rolling pin into a triangle shape. 5.spread fresh red tomato sauce on top. 6.Grate the yellow stringy cheese and sprinkle lightly on top. 7.Put your colorful tasty toppings on top. 8.place carefully into the oven to cook. 9.when ready cut in to even slices and eat

__Planting a veggie garden at school at school.__ GOAL.How to make a veggie garden at school. MATERIALS. Some where to put your garden,soil, something to dig with,yogghurt contaners,a watering can,a seeds. STEP1.First put the plants in your yellow contaners slowly. STEP2.Water the dry seeds. STEP3.Dig nice deep holes in the soft dirt for the plants to go in. STEP 4.Then put the plants in the ground carefully. STEP 5.Put the new pants firmly in the ground. STEP 6.Finally you will have a green beautiful veggie garden.

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9640914"

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM can you hear the booming of the hip hop music? Well Im going to tell you how awesome hip hop is. Once you have done hip hop you will feel really energetic and just want to do it over and over again.

To begin with hip hop is a great dance because you feel really energetic because you have just being jumping around. Your lower body gets strong and fit. Once you have done hip hop you will want to do it over and over again. If you know Will Smith he was one of the first people to do hip hop. It is a family dance because you will get into a group that will have the moves that you find ok to dance too. As a result both boys and girls can be excellent dancers. Boys think that girls do dancing because they are light on their feet. But the fact is that in hip hop you are very hard on your feet.

People all over the world have different ideas of dancing. Hip hop is danced all over the world from Japan to the Netherlands to even Jamaca. Hip hop has been around for many years and dancers today still do old school moves like Mc hammer and Michel Jackson. Hip hop originated in 1970s block parties in New York city mainly the Bronx.

I wonder why it is that boys hate dancing. in hip hop you get fitter than a foot ball player. In hip hop you can lern moves and then probably will show every one and they will probably love it. Dancing with no shoes is very natural. Just think about how many moves you can learn in hip hop and how much fun it is.

I decided to do hip hop because all my freinds said that thay had so much fun doing hip hop. Obviously I love hip hop. I have heard a rumour that hip hop sucks well that is definitely a rumour because hip hop is awesome and it does not suck. A friend of mine said that he does not want to do hip hop because the moves are too hard but is not hard at all it just takes time and practice

My hip hop teacher told me that even if you are unfit you can still do hip hop. After you have done a few practices you will really start to get stronger and fitter each time. The more you do it the better you will get.

To sum up that's why I think you should do Hip Hop because you get strong and fit, it's fun and anyone can dance.

WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __ media type="custom" key="8539631"
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

Topic
__Investigation__

__Question-__ What happens to foods when we put them into water ?

__What you will need:__ Water, sugar, flour, baking soda, cooking oil, lemon juice.

__What you will do:__ Put the sugar, flour, baking soda, cooking oil, lemon juice into an individual cup of water. Watch for one minute then stir and watch for another minute.

__What do you predict.__ What do you think will happen when you put them into water ? Sugar it might change colour Flour buhble Baking soda fizz Cooking oil greacc__y__ Lemon juice it might fizz_

What did you find out:i Sugar it dissolved the flour flouts the baking soda dissolved the cooking oil floted the lemon juice dissolved

What conclusions can you make ? i wonder why the lemon juice dissolved i notic that the flour floted What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment.__ i wonder what hapens if we put suger and oil together