Tony-Jahfire

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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 9 My goal is to use speech marks in my writing. My goal is to use some verbs to start my sentences. Self

Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

25/8/11 Some day me and my family would (will) have a bar-b (barbacue) at my house or at my Nan's house. My mum said we will have steaks, sausages and kababs (kebabs), that would be delicious. So my uncle Joe will be invited, he lives in Roturua far away from Pukekohe. Uncle Joe has a huge truck with a kind of bed inside. I might invite some of my cousins who are overseas.  They live in Nelson. Their mum lots of children some of them are grown up and some are still eleven or fourteen or a baby. I hope we have a great time. __ Brainstorming. __ WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10300051"

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9985659" How to make a yummy pizza
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.


 * 1)  Wash your dirty hands
 * 2) Next put on your filthy apron
 * 3) Make the mushy dough
 * 4) Hardly, push down and roll the dough into a shape
 * 5) Smoothly grate the cheese and sprinkle on top
 * 6) Toss the tomato sauce on top
 * 7) Put on your delicious topping
 * 8) Place in the hot oven to cook
 * 9) when ready cut a big peace and eat

How to make a wonderful garden

What you will need: spade Water can Seeds Plant pot Soil 1.First you put the seeds in the cosy soil 2.Next you water the plants with fresh cold water 3.After you dig holes with a hard spade 4.Then you put the flower in the dirty mud 5.Later on you gently pat down the mud around the flower 6.Eventually yo have a nice garden

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8696526"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641144"

Boom boom boom goes the sound of the drums I think drums are better than guitar because drums are easier to get kids learning skills and they help co-ordination. They are the most important part of a band. Drums are way better than guitar's because, when you play a guitar, you hurt your fingers.

<span style="color: #6100ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">Drumming involves lots of co-ordination as you need you be able to use all four limbs, that's your hands and feet altogether at the same time to produce different timings and beats. A drummer moves their hands and their feet quickly and you need good posture. You have to learn to do two or even three things at once, like being able to pat your head and rub your tummy at the same time. They have to be able to keep different rhythms and beat with different parts of your body. There are many different kinds of drum sticks like wire or sticks or plastic brushes. If you learn how to play the drums you can learn to play any instrument because of the skill you need to play drums. Drums teach you many different skills,you only need two sticks and a practice pad to start with. A drummer always has to count time.

<span style="color: #6100ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">Almost every band has a drummer, people most often dance to pop music, and the drummer keeps the beat rolling through the songs, also they create the mood, without the drummer to keep the beat all the other instruments in the band would fall apart. The bassist needs the drummer to keep in time, the guitarist and singer also need the drummer for the rhythm and the groove. Modern drum kit’s were first used in jazz and popular music many years ago. they were made up from drums and percussion instruments from many different kinds of music. They keep the band in time like a conductor, there are also the electronic drums these can remember lots of different sounds, the player can change the sound easily.

<span style="color: #6300ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">Another reason why I believe that drums a far better than guitars is because the beat of a drum can relax you if you feel stressed especially if you are frustrated beating the drums yourself can release those frustrations. Whereas if you were to play the guitar you would just end up hurting your fingers and making them bleed, leaving you feel even more frustrated. the drums also smooth your nerves if you are worried by starting with a slow beat of a song and moving on to a happier song.

<span style="color: #6300ff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 150%;">So after hearing my speech don't you think playing the drums is much better that playing the guitar. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __ media type="custom" key="8539639"
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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