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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8

My goal is to use verbs to start some of my sentences. My goal is to use full stops regularly.

Term 3 Week 9 My Goal is touse verbs to start some of my sentences. My goal is to use verbs to start some of my sentences.

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__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

18/08/11 Yesterday on a fantastick briht day with the sun shining in my face.

Me and Ben were playing a awesome game of touch.

Later on we were cloce the post so I went dummy half and then I did a drop kick over the post and we got one piont for the team. I onliy just got it by a tensee wensee bit because it was very hard and it was lage as well but it was no proble. Next we joged to the twenty two line and I did a massive kick rihgt up to the sky and it came down like a astroed flying down. BOOM as I did a chip over Jacks head and then try I loud try. However the game was over and we won with a daisl chip.

__ Brainstorming. __ WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9978143"
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

How to make a peporony cheese pizza

step 1.Wash your hands with squekey soap. 2.Put on your green red black apron. 3.Make the squishy dough. 4.Roll out the dough into a circle. 5.Spread the red juicey tomato sauce on top. 6.Put your delshe toppings on. 7.Grate the yellow cheese and sprinkle on top. 8.Place in the oven to cook a crunchy pizza. 9.When ready cut into a nice round circle shape then into slices and eat the wontefull pizza.

How to make a delshe fruit veggie garden. Goal:How to make a fruit and veggie garden. Materials:Soil,seeds, water,little containers,water can,shover. 1.First get the seeds and sprinkle it into the brown soil. 2.Then water the seeds with freesing fresh cold water. 3.Later get about two shovler's and dige one little round hole for the tinne plant. 4.By the time they got the plant and put it into the hole. 5.After that they gintly patted the soil. 6.Eventually they had a wonderfull viggie and fruit garden for everyone.

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8828386"
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument Listen to my speech media type="custom" key="9650766"

SMASH, BANG, as I tackle my opponent, the ref yells held, then I run back to the 5 metre line waiting but eager to run up and do my next mean tackle. Have any of you's played RL ? Well I do and it's an awesome sport and I love it. It's an outdoor sport that the whole family can get involved in and have fun. I think everyone should play Rugby League because it is a fast paced and exciting game.

It has skilled players and great teams in the NRL, like Anthony Minichello, who plays for the Sydney Roosters, Manu Vatuvei who plays for NZ Warriors, Billy Slater who plays for the the Melbourne Storms and my personal favourite Benjamin Marshall but we all know him as Benji, and he plays for the West Tigers.

My dad and my two little brothers and I all play Rugby League for Pukekohe Pythons Rugby League Club, my two little brothers Amiri and Toaiti play for the under 6's and my Dad plays for the Senior. This club was first established in 1995 by my papa John Henry, and did you know that the first NZ RL team was called the All Golds and they first established in 1908. The NZ RL team known as the Kiwis are the world champions at the moment, after beating Australia in the finals in 2008, the captain of the Kiwi's was favourite player Benji Marshall.

Who in here has had their Mum or Dad coach a sports team ? Well my Dad caoaches my under 9's team and we are learning how to play the game, team work, tackling techniques, passing and catching the ball properly and lastly he tells us to have fun out there because it's not always about winning, it's about giving it a go and trying your best. Now I know that everyone out there has an idol and has a dream that you want to follow, well I do. My idol is Benji Marshall and I hope one day to be just like him and represent and play for my country, the Kiwis. I like to call it my NRL dream, this is my ultimate goal.

I hope after hearing my speech today, about RL that this will encourage some of yous out there who are very skilled to go and join up and play the game of Rugby Leaague.

WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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