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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8 My Goal is to put a full stop at the end of a sentence and to put a capital letter at the start to make a new sentence.

Term 3 Week 9 My Goal is to use an adverb to start some of my sentence and to remember to put capital letter after a full stop and to put a full stop before a capital letter.

Term 3 Week 10 My Goal is to put commas in my story in the right place and to use a preposition to start some of my sentence.

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__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention.

Remember punctuation and spelling. Surprise Birthday

"Yes,I can't belive it's today i'ts happen so fast " said Charlotte. Today is Tuesday the 25 th of October which is Charlotte's 10th Birthday she is so excited to see what her dad got for her birthday present. When Charlotte got out of bed she went on her laptop to check on her email luckily she got a email from Sophie{ Charlotte's friend from France} saying HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHARLOTTE AND bonne chance aujourd'hui :):):) {Good Luck Today } Love Sophie.  Thank's Soph Charlotte said as she wrote her e-mail back to Sophie."Right shower time now" said Charlotte.Like a cheetah Charlotte sprinted to the bathrom to have a shower."Hey BSG"{BSG is a club that she and her friend's Charlotte exclaimed as she was walking outside to go to her friends house so she could walk with her friend's to school."Hey Charlotte" her friend's said."Hey Charlotte really do you really know what day it is today asked Charlotte well not really WHAT? HOW CAN YOU NOT KNOW WHAT DAY IT IS TODAY Charlotte Brainstorming

WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs.

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WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8829344"
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs Write a descriptive story about our wild self.
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

WALT start our stories with an exciting lead/beginning to entice the reader. __Success Criteria__
 * Start with a question__,__ a command, a quotation, an action, a sound effect or a thought.

WALT write in paragraphs. __Success Criteria__
 * Organise my ideas
 * Make a new paragraph when the place, action or time changes.
 * Miss two lines between each paragraph.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="9976833" __How to make the yummiest pizza ever__ 1. First wash your dirty hand with nice warm water 2.Next put on your colourful apron 3.Then make your squishy dough 4. Roll out your squishy dough into shape 5. Put on your ‍‍‍‍‍favourite ‍‍‍‍‍ toppings 6. After that spread ‍‍‍‍‍red juicy ‍‍‍‍‍ tomato sauce on top 7. Later on grate the hard block of cheese and sprinkle it on top 8. By the time place the pizza in your hot oven to cook <span style="color: #b700ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">9. As soon as it's ready cut it in a triangle and eat until it's gone.
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

<span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">__Planting a veggie garden__ <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">1. <range type="comment" id="353480">‍‍‍‍‍Firstly ‍‍‍‍‍ get yoghurt containers <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">2. Then get brown dry soil and put it in the yoghurt containers <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">3. After prepare your veggie garden <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">4. Now grab out your plant and put it in the soil <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">5. <range type="comment" id="827529">‍‍‍‍‍Next pat the plant down very gently in the soil so it wont stick out to much ‍‍‍‍‍ <span style="color: #eb00ff; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 130%;">6. Finally you'll have a beautiful garden with yummy veggies

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641132"

<span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">Do you think dogs are better than cats because I do. Dogs make better pets than cats because they help you exercise and because they are more fun pets than cats.

<span style="color: #008000; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">Dogs and human have been best friends for a long time. While dogs give unconditional love, loyalty and friendship to their owners,the owners are, in turn responsible for their proper care, food, water, shelter, safety and regular veterinary care and exercise.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">In fact, if you do not undertake proper care of your dog, it is likely to suffer from physical problems, but behavioral problems as well. There are some basic dog care tips, that will improve dog behavioral <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">I know dogs can be trained to guard the house, don't bark so much and don't poo in the house. I also know that dogs could start training as soon as you bring them home.Training can be done your self or a professional can be hired.Local dog training classes are often available.You can ask your veterinarian to recommend a trainer or look at in your local newspaper for a trainer in your area.
 * 1) <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">Collar your dog and attach an ID to it, with dog's name, your name and address and phone number written on it. The ID will prove to be great help if, and when, your dog ends up getting lost. Through the information provided on the ID someone will be able to bring your pet safely back to your home.
 * 2) <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">Bathing your dog at regular intervals is necessary. However giving it a bath on an exceedingly frequent basis can dry out its skin and coat and result in skin infections.
 * 3) <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">One of the main points that you need to keep in mind,while taking care of your dog, comprises of its diet. Remember, a nutritionally balanced diet, with constant access to fresh water, is as good for your dog as it is for you. Take advise from Veterinary on proper diet for your dog.
 * 4) <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">You need to provide proper shelter for your dog.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">I know that dogs hunt other animals and pets like birds or possums, Dogs smell out another animal and then they fight and kill the other animal and then they eat it. A hunting dog refers to any dog who asists human in hunting. there are several types of hunting dogs developed for various tasks. The major catergories of hunting dogs include Hounds, Terriers, Cur type dog, and Gun dog.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace; font-size: 150%;">That's why I think dogs are better than cats.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 140%;">WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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Topic
__Investigation.__ __Question__- What will happen to the sugar when we put it in the water __What you will need.__ **Brown Sugar, Coffee Crystals, Icing Sugar, White Sugar, Sugar Cubes.** **Water, Stopwatch** __What you will do:__ Put the different sugars in the water to see what happens.

__What do you predict?__ What do you think will happen to the different sugars? The brown sugar will disappear,the coffee crystal will sunk to the bottom ,the icing sugar will disappear, the white sugar will disappear as well and the sugar cubes will sunk to the bottom.

__What did you find out:__


 * || It melted || It disappeared || It changed into water or tea || It sat on the bottom || None ||
 * White Sugar ||  ||   ||   || Yes ||   ||
 * Brown Sugar ||  ||   || Yes ||   ||   ||
 * Coffee Crystals ||  ||   ||   ||   || Yes ||
 * Icing Sugar ||  ||   || Yes ||   ||   ||
 * Sugar Cubes || Yes ||  ||   ||   ||   ||

__What conclusions can you make ?__ The white sugar sat on the bottom, the brown sugar sort of changed into tea,the coffee crystal changed in to white, the icing sugar changed into a kind of water and the sugar cubes melted into little sugar

__What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment.__