Kyle

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 * My Writing Goals **



Term 3 Week 8 My goal this week is to use similes to start a sentence. I must also put full stops in the correct place.

week 9 my punctuation is to start putting capital letters after full stops.

I will start some of my sentences with a verb.

week 10 putting capital letters at the start of a sentence

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Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

23|8|2011  Pop, pop, pop as the balloons get stood on. On Saturday after my final rugby game and my twokn -DO grading when we got back it was 4:30 then we got slow bro redy it was fun becase we pot the oil in and it went down like a tornado. then we went to pic up tango

for his party. when we got there Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10300023"

WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.

WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use adverbs.

Speaking and Listening
WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech. media type="custom" key="9641076"

zzzzzzzzzzzz !!!!!!!! as the line zooms off my boat rod. Every body should go fishing because it gets your body up and running it is a very good family sport. I think everybody should do fishing because your arms get stronger and you can fight the big fish. Fish have been on earth for more than 450 million years and there are over 25,000 identified species of fish on the earth.

By going fishing you learn to be safe in the sea. This is necessary because NZ is surrounded by the sea. You learn to always put your life jackets on and don't rock the boat because it might tip over and don't make everyone go to one side of the boat because this might also make it tip over. Also don't jump on the boat because you could put a hole in the boat. When you go out on a boat you must alway check the sea. As when you go over some waves you might get hit by them in the wrong way and flip.

My 2 reason you can get fish and chips for free but at the shop you have to buy them. Fish has omega 3 oil in them and it is a very healthy food. If you were to buy it at a shop you would have to wait sometimes for a long time plus they would deep fry the fish and chips and that's not very healthy. When you catch it yourself you can cook it how you want. My Dad cooks our fish in a fry pan and sometimes he smokes them.

SO I think everyone should go fishing as it is the best.

WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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Topic
**Salt, quarter teaspoon measure, hot water and cold water, clear cup, thermometer, and a partner.** || 1. Mix hot and cold water in the cup so that when you test it with the thermometer, it reads 20°C. 2. Stir in salt, a quarter teaspoon at a time. Stir until each teaspoon of salt has dissolved before adding the next teaspoon. Record how many teaspoons of salt you stirred in before it stops dissolving. 3. Repeat this for water at 30°C, 40°C, and 50°C || How many teaspoons of salt do you think will dissolve in the water? 3 Why do you think there are different temperatures of water? because if it is to hot or cold it mite not dissolve Will the temperature of water affect the amount of salt that goes into it ? How? will the salt dissolve in cold water or will it stay the saym Which temperature of water will dissolve the most salt ? || Temperature of Water How many teaspoons could be stirred in? ||  ||
 * InvestigationTeamQuestion- How much salt will dissolve in the water? ||
 * __What you will need:__
 * __What you will do:__
 * __What do you predict?__
 * What did you find out:
 * 20°C 15 ||
 * 30c 15 ||
 * 50c 16 ||
 * __What conclusions can you make ?I wonder if 100c mite take 30 cotters of a tea spoon.__ ||
 * __ What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment. __ ||
 * __ What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment. __ ||