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** My Writing Goals **




Term 3 Week 8 My goal is to use a simile to start my sentence. I am going to put my speech marks in the right place.

Term 3 Week 9 My goal is to use speech marks in the right place. I am going to use adverbs to start my sentence.

Term 3 Week 10 My goal is to use a noun an verb combination to start my sentences. I am going to use paragraphs for my story's.

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Peer

__Journal Writing__
WALT write fluently using interesting language to capture our audiences attention. Remember punctuation and spelling.

Brainstorming. WALT brainstorm ideas and sort them so we can write in paragraphs. Click on the link below and read my mind map. media type="custom" key="10306097"

Ice Lightning
Zap as the fast zooming Ice lightning fly's through the sky with his sharp pointy wings. He is to fast for the people to see him when he fly's though the dark scary spooky sky. They try to look him up in the dragon book but Ice lightning is not in the big book of dragons.One day the people got him in a big net and left him in the net for the night. But in the morning they went to the net and there was a big hole in the net because he got away.

Everyone went and sent a search party to find that big fast dragon. Like a cheetah the fast black and silver dragon flew away from them as far as he could fly.He flew to the nest of dragons to get help from his big dragon friend that is called the Big Tera.The Big Tera helped his friend Ice Lightning get a new wing so he could fly again and not die.The Big Tera said you are immortal so now you live for ever and ever and will never die.

So he went out the nest to go fight again and kill more dragons to get more super sonic powers so he gets more powers so he could rule the earth.As soon as he goes out to fight he is already ruling the world and he has got all the powers he could get so now he is the master of dragons and now he has to get along with the people and be friends with them.And be there pets so they can play together.THE END WALT write a descriptive story about our wild self. __Success Criteria__ media type="custom" key="8829872" WALT add detail to our stories. __Success Criteria__ ‍‍‍ media type="custom" key="9933427" ‍‍‍‍1.How to make a pepperoni pizza ‍‍‍‍ 2.Wash you really dirty hands. 3.Secondly put on your black apron. 4.Make the ‍‍‍‍soft brown ‍‍‍‍ dough. 5.Roll the dough into a big round circle. 6.Spread the red ‍‍‍‍tamato sausse ‍‍‍‍ on the top of the pizza. 7.Put on the dilisise toppings on the top. 8.‍‍‍‍Grate ‍‍‍‍ the yellow cheese and sprinkle it on the top. 9.Place in the hot oven for 25mins and turn it to 250 degrese c. 10.‍‍‍‍lastly ‍‍‍‍ take out the oven and cut it and the eat your yummy nice pizza.
 * include adjectives
 * include similes
 * include exciting verbs.
 * Use a variety of time connectives.
 * Use a variety of verbs.
 * Use interesting adjectives.
 * Use ‍‍‍adverbs.

How to make a coulurfull garden

1.First place the tiny little seed into the small black garden pots. 2.Sprinkle the tiny little seeds with a big black watering can. 3.Dig or rake the hard dirt to make it soft so you can put the ting delicate plants. 4.Then carefully put the plants in the holes so they can grow into a big garden. 5.After that pat them down into the ground so they don't fall over and die. 6.Finally you will have a big coulurfull garden and to eat. Speaking and Listening WALT write and present a persuasive argument. Listen to me make my speech.

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Splash Splash as the Big 80 Pound King Fish jumps out of the water. I think everyone should go fishing once or twice a week to get their body strength up. It is also fun because it gives you skills in your life about the water.

I believe you should eat some fish on the weekend to get your brain working and get you healthy and strong. You also get a free meal when you go fishing on the boat or the shore. You can go fishing on a wharf and stay there for a night or two and have fish for dinner, also for breakfast. Then you can go home in the boat or car.

Fishing is so fun that you might get 20 fish in one day and then you get a family feast for all of your family. You also learn to catch big fish on a boat and you also catch small things on shore. It is also fun to catch crabs, yummy. I think Red Snapper, King Fish, Kahawai are some of the yummy foods I have tasted.

You can also learn to Kayak and catch fish and the Kayak has rod holders and and fish tanks in the back. It is easy to drive a boat on the water when you are 12 or 13 you can drive a boat and catch fish. Kayaking also keeps you strong and healthy because you paddle and on boats the motor drives the boats

So I think everyone should go fishing once or twice a week to keep their body strength up and running and also get their muscles working hard to catch a big Marlin. Catching a Marlin is a once in a life time so you better go fishing and catch the fish of your dreams. So tell your Dad or Mum to take you fishing on the weekend and go and get the free meal of tasty delicious fish.

WALT express ideas and information clearly. __ Success Criteria __
 * Use eye contact when speaking
 * Speak expressively
 * Articulate clearly
 * Use appropriate volume when speaking
 * Understand and use a wider range of vocabulary and ideas when speaking
 * Maintain the attention of the audience

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__Investigation.__ __Question__- What will happen to the sugar when we put it in the water __What you will need.__ **Brown Sugar, Coffee Crystals, Icing Sugar, White Sugar, Sugar Cubes.** **Water, Stopwatch** __What you will do:__ Put the different sugars in the water to see what happens.

__What do you predict?__ What do you think will happen to the different sugars? the brown sugar will sit at the bottom. white sugar will go to the bottom.the coffee crystals will turn into coffee.the sugar cubes will fall apart. the icing sugar will sit at the bottom.

__What did you find out:__


 * || It melted || It disappeared || It changed into water or tea || It sat on the bottom || None ||
 * White Sugar ||  ||   ||   || YES ||   ||
 * Brown Sugar ||  ||   ||   || YES ||   ||
 * Coffee Crystals ||  ||   ||   ||   || changed coulor ||
 * Icing Sugar ||  || YES ||   ||   ||   ||
 * Sugar Cubes ||  ||   ||   ||   || fell apart ||

__What conclusions can you make ?__

__What questions do you have now after you have done the experiment.__